The Official Writing Challenge
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Good details of the struggles of wandering in the desert. :)
02/19/09
Very descriptive--I wish I knew why the narrator was in the desert, though. And if the narrator died at the end...how did this story get written?

Your writing is top-notch, and I read this twice so I could savor it all.
Very moving and powerful story. I liked the ending as it leaves us all wondering! Well done.
Blessings,
Norms
02/21/09
Beautiful writing in this piece. I thought it was more of an allegory of redemption rather than someone literally dying in the desert. Either way, I enjoyed reading this story.