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Good story. :) Humorous, if it were not TRUE to BELIEFS. :[
02/19/09
This really made me appreciate the Truth!
You had me smiling. We always say Karma comes back to bite you!
Blessings,
Norms
02/21/09
Cute story. Perhaps giving the animals Indian names would make it more authentic. The title fits the piece well.
02/25/09
This one I read to my husband. He laughed until his eyes watered. He has some health issues and many of the wonderfully written pieces I didn't share with him because they are so sad, but true.
Thank you for this entry. It made my day! Very creative.
Mona
02/25/09
A delicious parody of transmigration in all of its foolishness. I do agree that more Indian sounded names would have fitted better. But then again you're not exactly aiming for 100% accuracy, are you? Well done.