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02/19/09
How wonderful that you're corresponding with these Indian people!

Be careful of sentence fragments.

I was quite touched by your loving spirit toward this country.
02/19/09
It sounds like you have a tender heart towards the people of India. You have learned a lot about the culture and it shows in this piece. Good job.
02/20/09
Beautiful testimony of your love and compassion.
Blessing,
Norms
02/21/09
Thanks for sharing these personal experiences. The Word is such a blessing. :)
02/23/09
This is well-written, informative and very moving. The compassion I felt flowing from your heart were very discernable.