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02/19/09
How wonderful that you're corresponding with these Indian people!

Be careful of sentence fragments.

I was quite touched by your loving spirit toward this country.
02/19/09
It sounds like you have a tender heart towards the people of India. You have learned a lot about the culture and it shows in this piece. Good job.
Beautiful testimony of your love and compassion.
Blessing,
Norms
Thanks for sharing these personal experiences. The Word is such a blessing. :)
This is well-written, informative and very moving. The compassion I felt flowing from your heart were very discernable.