The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful true story!

My main suggestion would be to work on commas--you have a few where they're not needed, and some missing where they are needed. Watch out for run-on sentences, too.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this suspenseful story.
This story kept me riveted throughout. Gread writing.

Just a small note. Pondicherry is not a "village" but a city of over 5 million.

I enjoyed reading this story.
Wow, the competition is tough in intermediate this week...with good entries like this one...very good story telling here.
Precious story. :)
It is amazing how our animals sense danger when we don't understand what is going on. Great story.