The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/09
Excellent lesson for us all, and a superb comparison.

02/19/09
Excellent poem with a good message. Well-done.
Well done on this piece of poetry.
Blessings,
Norms
02/20/09
I love this poem...what a great job you did constructing it, and putting depth into the message. Well done.
I love the message of this poem, but would also love to see greater consistency in the meter. This is a sobering reminder of our blindness to our own hypocrisy.
Unusual take on the topic.
This was almost like a song to me. I liked it very much.