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02/12/09
Excellent entry. Sometimes it IS difficult to do the will of God or to rejoice when others are following His call, especially if it impacts us personally.
02/12/09
Nice job showing the emotional turmoil of your MC. :)
02/13/09
Good ending as it leaves many possibilities. I liked Melissa and identified with her. Good entry.
02/14/09
I like the double meaning in your title.

I felt that some of your dialog seemed somewhat stilted and unnatural. It may be as simple as fix as using contractions every now and then, so that it sounds like the was people actually speak.

I really liked the enthusiasm of the parents for their new calling!
02/15/09
Wow, that would be quite a decision! Good story.