The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1039 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Powerful and moving. Excellent entry!
Heart-wrenching story. Good description on the emotional focus of MC. :)
I have tears in my eyes. Really loved this moving piece. Well done.
02/13/09
Excellent writing in this piece.
02/14/09
Well done!

I only have one tiny suggestion: it's best not to use '&' for 'and' in prose writing.

Your characterization was excellent.
02/15/09
Wonderful! It is a griping and thoughtful story. I didn't see the end coming with his reason to be in Bolivia until it was revealed, so that's good writing!
02/15/09
Oh, I'm sorry! I meant "gripping", of course! LOL.