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A lot of action - appropriate for an adventure story :), and good descriptions of the activities. :) I would have liked to have seen equal attention to the descriptions of the MCs. Nice job.
I enjoyed reading this story. Would have liked to have known more about the MC'S, but I liked the element of surprise for the last day. Nice going!
02/13/09
I liked Sherry for her unselfish nature and Larry for taking the time to plan such an adventurous honeymoon. This story certainly could expand as they share their lives together. Any plans for a sequel?
02/14/09
Sweet lesson in unconditional love.

One important note: Costa Rica's not in South America--it's in Central America.

Your characters are well-written and likeable!

02/15/09
Nice, romantic story! Though the local was a tiny bit of a slip with the topic, the story itself was very satisfying in its conclusion and plot. I enjoyed reading it!
Oh, this is such a sweet story... I love a good romance! :-)