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Excellent entry. Thanks for sharing!
I haven't rode the bus in the GTA but it is similar to the subway. I'm from out of town, but when I go to city-center, I like to ride the subway.
I loved the story.
Seamless read. Your story lured me all the way through. Great grass roots topic.
02/06/09
A well-written piece. Good work.
This was incredible. I imagine that man to be an angel or Jesus himself, walking with her.
02/08/09
Good story. Knowing Toronto (and the bus/subway system) as I do, I could easily travel the route with you. I didn't know about the anti-God campaign, so thank you for writing about it, and for reminding me that in a secular society such as Canada, there are still many who believe and stand up for their faith.
Thank you for this moving story! I enjoyed how you kept the man from the bus intertwined with the story as you told it -- and the ending was so thought provoking.