The Official Writing Challenge
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Was a compelling read. Left me feeling safisfied like eating a good meal but also wanting to know more with a few unanswered hooks in there.
02/06/09
I was hoping someone would tell a story about the falls. Good work.
Anyone who would dare to go over those Falls in a barrel better pray! I remember hearing stories of one such person. I could never do it myself.
Good writing.
02/08/09
I'm glad someone wrote about the stunts that Niagara Falls has been witness to. This is a very good story.
02/09/09
Putting this within the structure of a bedtime story was a wonderful idea, and I really like the way you handled the flashbacks. I expect to see you moving up again soon.
02/09/09
Very well told! I love the format of the flashback, and then the girls waking her to finish telling the story. The ending is precious - the auntie's warning to her nieces. Nicely done!
02/09/09
Your writing style is consistently masterful. I enjoyed your entry.
02/10/09
I enjoyed this a lot, great humor and insight into the craziness of the fight for fame and fortune. You have a wonderful knack for telling a good story.
02/11/09
Well, I've never heard this story told quite like this, lol. How fun, you made it real and I still wanted to read more even at the end. Good job! ^_^
02/12/09
I enjoyed this read very much! Well done. :)
I think I could safely say you'll be moving up. Your stories are fresh and interesting.
02/12/09
Congrats on moving up to Advanced. You already have one EC... two more will bring you up to Masters where you belong. I look forward to reading the entries that get you there.