The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/09
You've definitely expressed your opinion clearly in this poem. Thanks for sharing your point of view.
01/30/09
A passionate poem!

It's a bit weak on topic, since this is a "geography" theme, and you went a more spiritual route.

Still, your message is loud and clear--thank you for writing this!
THis is a beautiful and powerful poem.
02/03/09
I guess that to some extent the world has always been divided. Jesus warned his disciples that the world would hate them and that has been echoed down through the ages.
I would like to have seen a bit more in your piece about the Kingdom of God once it has been brought into unity with Christ, ie what will happen after Christ does return
02/04/09
The poem was very good, I would have liked more of a tie in with the topic, which I think you could have done by continuing with the "united" theme is the first paragraph.