The Official Writing Challenge
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You've definitely expressed your opinion clearly in this poem. Thanks for sharing your point of view.
A passionate poem!

It's a bit weak on topic, since this is a "geography" theme, and you went a more spiritual route.

Still, your message is loud and clear--thank you for writing this!
THis is a beautiful and powerful poem.
I guess that to some extent the world has always been divided. Jesus warned his disciples that the world would hate them and that has been echoed down through the ages.
I would like to have seen a bit more in your piece about the Kingdom of God once it has been brought into unity with Christ, ie what will happen after Christ does return
The poem was very good, I would have liked more of a tie in with the topic, which I think you could have done by continuing with the "united" theme is the first paragraph.