The Official Writing Challenge
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I love how the Lord refreshes us in the most unexpected ways. Nicely done.
01/22/09
This is a sweet story. I love how you compared the billabong in parallel with the river of life. Good job!
01/23/09
Pretty cool--like a report on Australia, but with a story framing it.

FYI--the tree is a "baobab".

Your last paragraph is wonderful.
Ah, been there, done that. No, not Australia, but needing a place to run. I liked the way she took an "Imagination Vacation" and was still able to 'come back home'. Wonderful!
01/24/09
Very good.