The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Oh, I love the musicals and the movie dancers, too!

This has a lyrical tone to it. Nicely done.
01/15/09
I enjoy stories set in the Depression and WWII, because that is when my parents were children and teenagers.

You had some very nice descriptions, and I like the way you ended your piece. Good job! :)
01/16/09
Thank you for sharing an important part of America's history as seen through the eyes of a young girl. Good descriptive writing.
I liked the way that the MC carried on the legacy of hope and non-complaining. Very well done!