The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Very good use of repetition throughout the poem and in the title. Good job.
Small words can make such a big difference & I like the repetition too.
01/18/09
Your concern for our country is well-expressed in this thoughtful poem. I like the phrase, "freedom of, not from"--it says a lot!