The Official Writing Challenge
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Much of your story was very entertaining, and a little humorous. Spacing between paragraphs helps to get through your writing a little easier, and easier on the eyes. God bless ya, littlelight
Yes, the same word came to my mind: entertaining. This is a relaxed discourse, true-to-life. I also agree that paragraph spacing would assist the reader.