The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Well-written poem, and beautifully sincere prayer. Good job.
01/15/09
Well written.
01/16/09
Nice job with the poetry. :)
01/19/09
Oh, I really like this prayer, and the way you wrote it. Great job!
I would suggest that you add punctuation to this poem - it helps it to flow better, and makes it easier to read.
Keep up the great work!
01/19/09
I appreciated this prayer for our country, and I enjoyed the way you presented it as poetry with the last line of each stanza a plea for the USA. Good job!