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Beautifully childlike tone and cadence. And like the speaker, I as a reader didn't see the reason for the ride until the end.
This is a great piece! I love the rhythm and ryme. Well done. May god bless you always!
07/27/05
Enjoyed reading the poem, very smooth and nicely written. Childlike faith it seems. God bless ya, littlelight
07/27/05
Absolutely beautiful. I was right there in the backseat with her!
07/27/05
I would love for you to submit wonderful poems like this to my group "Poetry and Poets of God": http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/
Oh, I was riding happily along, too, ready for a carefree day! Suddenly, I caught my breath as I comprehended the meaning of the ride! At that same moment, the peace and grace mentioned in your poem also filled my own heart. Well done!
Loved this - the childlike tone, word choices, and rhythm, and the surprising ending. Well done!