The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
A beautifully structured poem.
01/15/09
Clever poem, and the last line is a great kicker.
01/16/09
Expertly written. :)
01/19/09
This is the best I've read. This poem is structured beautifully, and on top of that it evokes beautiful, heart-stirring imagery.
I hope you win with this peice. It is wonderful!