The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/05
That was a deep and dark "well" to drink from. Very sombre, and eerie feel to your story. Fitting. God bless ya, littlelight
07/26/05
WOW! Creative writing from a different angle..from the dark side. Thanks for sharing your talent.
07/27/05
Good writing, very figurative, but I'm not sure what point you are trying to make. God bless you always!
07/29/05
Painful stuff, and haunting. That last-minute cry sounded just like the thief on the cross to me.......