The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/05
That was a deep and dark "well" to drink from. Very sombre, and eerie feel to your story. Fitting. God bless ya, littlelight
07/26/05
WOW! Creative writing from a different angle..from the dark side. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Good writing, very figurative, but I'm not sure what point you are trying to make. God bless you always!
Painful stuff, and haunting. That last-minute cry sounded just like the thief on the cross to me.......