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12/04/08
I could relate very well. My dogs got a skunk a couple of years ago. It took forever to get rid of the smell. Thanks for making me laugh.
12/05/08
What a unique twist! This is definitely the first Christmas story I've ever read with a skunk in it.

Consider making this longer, with the dialogue of some of the guests when confronted with the skunk. It could be a very funny narrative!
What an awful event, and yet, an enjoyable read. I agree, a little dialogue and reactions of guests could help the reader feel more a part of the story. Good work. :)
12/12/08
Emily, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 2, placing 10th for the level.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=23381

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)