The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice story. Liked the details of the daily struggles. IMHO seemed like the "surprise" came a little abruptly. A little more dialogue between the MC and spouse before revealing the surprise might have aided a smoother transition. :)
11/22/08
Precious, and sounded as if it came from personal history. God bless!
11/27/08
Noreen, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 2, placing 8th for the level.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=343147

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)