The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/08
Very touching, and well done. Thanks for reminding us of more important treasures!
Sweet story. Nice how these two complemented each others needs. :)
I enjoyed your take on the topic.
Your Mr. Murphy/Lewis character was particularly intriguing. I'm curious how his tender heart became masked in that tough outer shell.
11/25/08
Enjoyed this much, would love to read a prequel on Mr. Curmudgeon and get the rest of the story. A lot of heart shown here on the part of Denise.
11/25/08
The last sentence put a smile on my face too. There are a few punctuation & grammar boo-boos. If you read your story out loud, I think you'll be able clean it up some. The idea is creative and your writing flows nicely - the story is GRAND! I really enjoyed it!
11/27/08
Mary, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 2, placing 7th for the level.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=343147

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)