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11/20/08
Very nice story. I really like how you developed your characters in such a short story. They are very endearing.
This tender story needs a tissue warning. Nice writing.
Were I to make any suggestion at all, word count permitting, I would like to see you show that Sara is ragged and cold, rather than just telling us.
11/21/08
This is a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Very, very well done.
Precious ending to a well written story. :)
Stories, no matter how sad, rarely bring tears to my eyes because I have seen and heard so many things in my life. But your story brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story, for the hope that lights up the end.
God bless you.
11/27/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended for Level 2, Lisa. You did very well, placing 5th for the level. Well done.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=343147

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
11/27/08
I'm sorry, I meant Rachel, not Lisa. (I think I've gone into notification overload). :-)