The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/08
Good story - shows the power of involvement in a good project.
Nice story. IMHO, I would have liked to have seen some dialogue between the aunt and the other residents to find out just how all of this activity came about. :)
Surprised this is the only entry mentioning cards to the troops. Dialogue would help to "show" more and "tell" less. Nice story.