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07/20/05
That was a very nice story. Using our time wisely. Great thought and beautiful story. God bless ya, littlelight
07/21/05
Enjoyed your story. Good use of dialogue and thought.
07/22/05
I enjoyed this story as well. It held my interest throughout and I welcomed the change that came over your father.
07/22/05
Sorry, I meant 'the father' instead of 'your father'. The story had that personal touch, that's why.
07/22/05
A very touching story :)
07/24/05
Good story. The POV in the opening was hard to determine. You might try more beats and less afirmations.
07/24/05
Father's are so important, especially to boys. Nice job. I liked his wake-up call. Nice job.
07/25/05
You've used dialogue well to tell your story. Both characters are really believable. Well done.