The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoy this! Keep up the good work in your poetry.
07/20/05
Yes, this was very nice.
Keep it up. God bless ya, littlelight
07/21/05
Great thoughts on boy David. What a remarkable character. I wasn't sure what the word "tamp" meant though.
07/21/05
Nicely written
07/22/05
Lovely poem. There's this feeling of your closeness to God.
07/24/05
Good poem despite the measure issues.
07/25/05
Great work, I didn't read the title but knew it had to be David. Your rhymes work well.
07/26/05
Hi Debra. I'm just popping in very quickly to let you know that your poem was in the semi-finals for the Camping Challenge. So be encouraged - you did very well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)