The Official Writing Challenge
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Exquisitely poignant. I love this. Thank you.
Oh my. That took a turn I didn't expect. Excellent way of pulling reader in and turning the table to something powerful. Good job.
10/31/08
This is an excellent story. Well-written.
Beautiful parallel of the two stories. One point remains confusing to me - since the child in the first "happening" was not given a name I couldn't tell if the second "happening" was occurring simultaneously and therefore two different MCs, or if the second part was separated by time and this was the same MC, Bessie - ?
11/05/08
Unexpected but beautiful twist. Loved the arms crossed in an eternal embrace. Very well written.
11/06/08
Congratulations on being Highly Commended. I was pretty sure this story would place. Thanks again for sharing.