The Official Writing Challenge
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Love "Grams'" advice, just hope it's as easy for the MC to carry out as it was for Grams to dish out. Nice writing. :)
I love the wonderful message in this story. So many people today seem to think that marriage is more like tossed salad. The detail was great. Thank God for people who are not afraid to confront others with the truth in love.
10/25/08
Wonderful story with lots of memorable descriptions. I liked the advice given. Great job.
Charming and so true! I loved the gramdmother's wisdom and advice. Great job writing! I really enjoyed reading this!!
10/27/08
Well this went where I wasn't expecting it to! Great story and great advice. How many marriages would be saved if there were more people prepared to give that kind of counsel rather than the self-centred stuff this woman had been getting from her therapist. I loved the line, "Tell me about the only situation where LOVE isn't enough. Good job!
Grams is a wise woman, and Kelly is blessed to have her advice. I sure hope that the couple stayed together and worked things out.

This was very well written. Keep this up and you will be moving up to advanced level very soon. :)

Thank you for sharing.
10/29/08
Wonderful message within a well-written story. The voice of the MC was so real and I could see Grams in my mind easily. Just great.