The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
I traveled back in time while reading this thoughtful poem. It captured the many journies of all those who searched for God and home. "Very nicely done"
07/20/05
Perhaps the pilgrim
Will find inner peace
When they learn
To relinquish all
Their strivings...
That was awesome.
God bless ya, littlelight
07/21/05
Some nice images : thanks for sharing
07/21/05
Yes, we have to be in the wilderness to appreciate all of God's grace and His Rain. Lovely poem.
07/24/05
Great images in this free form poem, a little effort and this one might be publishable.
07/25/05
Really good images. Have you thought about reworking this so that the ‘one’s become ‘my’? This will make you poem more immediate for the reader as we are invited on the narrator’s journey.