The Official Writing Challenge
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What a joy to absorb! Your baking skills are akin to mine - as is your love and appreciation for our Lord. Thank you for delighting us!
Great writing! You really kept the reader involved with the "thought-notes". I was just sure, though, the 6-8 minutes was going to give the MC the MOST trouble - glad it turned out a blessing. :)
10/25/08
I liked the MCs voice in this piece. I could "hear" her thoughts and picture what was happening. Good job.
I agree with everyone else who enjoyed the MC's voice. I enjoyed it too. This is my favorite in intermediate so far. A very delightful read. :)