The Official Writing Challenge
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A Christmas bake-off contest sounds like a really fun idea. I am glad that everyone turned out to be a winner and that the bake-off was for a good cause.

My only suggestion to make this piece even better than it already is would be to use more dialogue between the characters to "show" what you are saying rather than just "telling."

Thank you for sharing this story. I enjoyed reading it. :)
The cooking contest was a good idea. You described the details well. Nice story.