The Official Writing Challenge
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Precious story of giving from generous hearts. Clear details and realistic characterizations. Nice job. :)
10/21/08
What a clever story and full of the love of a brother for his sister. You had me right from the beginning sentence. Love the way hope came home for just a few minutes at the end.
10/22/08
Wow! This is brilliant! Pwerfully written and very moving. You captured the mix of emotions masterfully.