The Official Writing Challenge
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At first i was wondering why they didn't have a tree, because that would seem to be the norm for even a medical facility but i guess that's not that important in the overall scheme of things. It was a fun story and nicely done.
This was a fun story to read. I could visualize the "Christmas tree" and the smiles it put on the patients' faces.
What a unique take on the topic. Creative.
Very creative. Truly illustrates "Necessity is the mother of invention." I must live in a monochromatic world - all the catheter tubing I've ever used has been clear so nurses could note the output. :)
Questioning the green catheter tubing myself. Could it be clear tubing filled with the green jello no one ever eats? :) Anyway it was a good story and unexpected.
Congatulations on your placement. These nurses were quite creative, as you were in the writing.
Write On big sister!!!!! Whoo hoo!!
Congratulations on your win! Great story!!
Congratulations on your 1st place. This is very clever. Great job with the topic.
Very creative and a well-deserved win. Takes me back to several Christams eves on duty in hospital wards. Maybe to clear up the colour question: everywhere I've worked catheters are clear plastic and oxygen tubing is green. But personally I didn't think that detracted from your story.
Hi I like the way you wrote you story - well written and brought back memories of my nursing days - congratulations on first place win.