The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/05
Well written, charming story! It brought joyful tears to remember my own backyard campouts. "Well Done"
07/19/05
Lovely fun memories, very nicely described. I felt I was there with ya. Interesting and delightful. God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
I can imagine the great fun you had. You portrayed it so clearly and convincingly that I was watching the whole scene. Beautifully done.
07/22/05
I really enjoyed this (but felt badly reading about the chicken coop -nothing much smells worse!). I grew up watching all the old cowboy shows on tv (my Great-grandpa knew Hopalong Cassidy :) A vivid telling :)
07/24/05
Charming story. Follow dialogue rules and the essay will be much clearer.
Nice description. I love reading how children learned how to play without video games and TV. I would only work on grammer and maybe a title that reflects the story more. Nice Job.
07/24/05
What great imaginations we had as kids! A privilege to hear your story and be reminded that creativity and imagination are still with us - just in a different ways. Thanks for posting.