The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this story, especially the little twist. I was not expecting the MC to be a grandma! Nicely told!
10/16/08
What a wonderful surprise at the end. I wasn't expecting that to happen. My imagination as to what I thought the MC looked like had to make an about face! This was a well-written story. I enjoyed the pace of it also.
10/16/08
I liked the twist at the end. Nice job.
This is a beautiful story. Afraid, for the challenge, it might be scored a little down for not being high "on topic" - but, I loved your clear, selective details - you did an excellent job concealing your MC's identity. :)