The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
Great descriptions. I especially like your Christmas morning scene.
10/16/08
Great descriptions. I especially like your Christmas morning scene.
Nice personal narrative. You captured the special feelings of a child getting to "play Santa." :)
I enjoyed reading this sweet story of childhood memories. It had a nice, easy flow and was easy to read. Great job!
What sweet memories! Finding out there is no santa is traumatic for some children, but you handled this one well!
10/22/08
I remember "Betsy Wetsy" and your writing really took me back! Glad it was exciting instead of disappointing to find out about Santa.
10/22/08
What a great memory. Thank you for sharing;)
How sweet! This story was just adorable, and I really enjoyed reading it.
10/22/08
This piece is VERY well-written and enjoyable. I could see the entire story as I read it. Nice work! :)
Wow! What a beautiful memory. Well told.