The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
A tree without lights in the middle of the road? This must be a true story - who would make this up? LOL. I like the child's voice. Good job.
Laury
10/16/08
I loved the voice of this young narrator. I also liked the fact that this is simply a funny story. No big points to make, no sermons to preach...just a fun story.
10/16/08
I really liked the main character's voice in this piece.
Hm-m-m-m, got me wondering WHY they put it in the MIDDLE of a road, too..... Glad your MC was happy with the lights they added and that others in the community supported his idea. :)
10/23/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. You did a good job with the MC's voice. I, too, wonder what the plain tree in the middle of the road was all about.