The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
Most unique prose. And poignant. Thank you.
10/20/08
Your piece has many conflicting statements, making it seem that your emotional bondage overrides your writing ability. An example: you state that you would want to be a tree, one of the reasons being that it has no brains; but, then, you state that as a tree you would wait with anticipation - wondering answers to numerous questions. Couldn't do that with no brain.

Somber writings such as this leave me asking: "Why do some think it so noble to rob themselves of the joy of celebrating the Savior's birth?"
10/21/08
Somber, or abstract writing usually makes a point. World population; 6.7 billion, Christians; 2 billion. How many will celebrate with out a tree, gifts, health, family, joy, or maybe a pair of mittens?