The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/05
"Brilliant!" I love the way you told the story from natures point of view! Simply charming and unique!
I liked your story from the creatures point of view. What was it? A bear? A racoon? Nice job.
07/19/05
A very wise warning: always remember that in the wild we are the intruders. We can not expect a wild animal to respect our belongings. Never experienced a bear visit, but did have a raccoon visit the screen room of our tent one time to check out fragrances of food. This was amusing! Good moral.
07/20/05
Superb! I just love the way you told this story and the surprise ending with its moral lesson. Lovely read.
07/22/05
Fantastic! I could see it all :)
07/24/05
Well written from an interesting point of view. Liked the phrase 'glittery gaze.'Well done.
07/24/05
Wow! I loved this little piece, especially the POV and characterization. Thanks for posting this most enjoyable read.
08/02/05
Debra,
This is a very entertaining story. I like it.