The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
This is such a sweet story. Is this a true event in your life? If so, what great insight you had to add more lights to the tree instead of scolding your dauther. What a sweet child! Thank you for sharing.
What a tender tribute, obviously written with a heart overflowing with love. Thank you for sharing this story. :)
10/22/08
I identify with the feeling of a small child being too quiet; my first-born son 'undecorated' a friend's wedding cake when he was 9 months old! You obviously had wonderful insight into your daughter's innermost secrets and responded perfectly. Your eagerness to share this precious memory shines brightly. However the words seem to tumble out, and a little more editing to shorten the sentences would make it easier to read.