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07/19/05
What a delightful story!
A child's eyes are so simple and pure. You have captured a beautiful memory!
07/20/05
You were old enough to appreciate and remember certain sights and sounds and young enough to get the most pleasure out of everything. Nicely told childhood experience.
07/22/05
A nice memory, good images. Well written.
07/24/05
You have a great way of describing what you saw.
07/24/05
Lots of good description in this tight memory article. Thanks.
Great description. Our RV has been out of commission and your details want me to jump in and go now! Nice job. I would only suggest a more creative title.
07/25/05
Good job, Alyssa. I like the way you clearly present it as a child's memories, through the use of 'Mommy' and 'Daddy', and your final few sentences, "Goodbye lake; goodbye trees and squirrels. Goodbye big damp bathrooms. Goodbye campground." Beautiful memories. Well done.