The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/08
Very sweet!
You caught the feelings of loneliness the holidays bring to many. Good job. :)
What a nice surprise, great friends and a family too. I loved this piece. You are definitely gifted in storytelling.
10/14/08
Good Job! I love sweet Christmas stories like this one, those that you don't guess the ending right off the bat. I was a little disappointed in Louise!
10/14/08
I agree with the above comments, a great story and a great story teller. Keep it up.
10/16/08
This one is very sweet. Nice work!
I was feeling sorry for Carol and enjoyed her surpise, too. Good job showing her emotions.