The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/08
I enjoy word play, so this appealed to me.

FYI--I think you used "innocents" when you meant "innocence."

This may have rambled a bit; nevertheless, I really enjoyed reading it.
Nice tie-in for the mentioning of so many different Christmas Carols. Good job. :)
10/14/08
This was a good retelling of a memory. I enjoyed hearing about all the songs and your reflections on them, but it must be too early in the morning, because I can't figure out what the song Ollie Fateful is. Oh, wait, I think i just got it: All Ye Faithful.