The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a creative entry. I'm sure this could have happened exactly as you have written it:) Love your title, too.
Clever idea!

There were a few times when his narration didn't sound like the voice of a 10-year-old, but all in all I really think you did a great job on this creative entry.
Great POV. This actually does give the retelling of the story a fresh and personal touch.
Creative slant on the topic. Nicely written. :)
"Close your eyes as I tell you the words they sang."

I did try to close my eyes and listen, but I couldn't read then. (hehe) This is an excellent entry.