The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
Hey a story that takes place not too far from where I live--cool. I enjoyed the message of going for it even though there weren't many people and the reward of helping people relax.
10/10/08
This is charming and unique for this topic.

You could take it one step upward by picking one or two characters and really helping the reader get to know them through dialogue, description, etc.

Thanks for this very pleasant read!
Nicely written personal narrative, but you left one question unanswered for me - was the promise kept? :)