The Official Writing Challenge
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Well, this got my tear ducts working & it's too early in the morning for that! I can picture the whole scene--it's as if I've been to that little town & church & heard those dogs in the truck (& I think I may have...:-)). Very nicely told!
10/09/08
What a beautiful story without the interruption of the contrived happy ending where Annie's brother takes her in to live in his mansion and they all live happily ever after. This was real and I thank you for that.
10/09/08
Well done! Annie's a great character, and I'd read lots of stories about her.
Well written - descriptions and mood were excellent. Precious story. :)
This is a beautiful sweet story. It touches me when I read of people touching others. Congratulations on a job well done...