The Official Writing Challenge
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Your sad, suspenseful story is a creative twist on the topic.
I really think this story is incomplete. I was in too big of a hurry to get it in. I'm probably not supposed to comment on my own story but I couldn't leave it as is...
Jesus should be the one at the door - The true Champion and those coming after Dennis would look for him and not be able to find him because He was found by the Saviour first.
Thank you for your understanding.

I like this. I would encourage you to go back and finish it the way you see it in your mind. :)