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You used the game of LIFE well to show the reality of life. Your stormy night added good atmosphere to the story.
09/19/08
Good visuals. I could 'see' the whole family in the farmhouse, faces illuminated by the candles. I could smell the rain and hear the thunder. Nicely done.
09/24/08
Great descriptions and actions. I remember those kind of nights as a kid, but I think we played Monopoly!