The Official Writing Challenge
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You've created an excellent parable through your descriptive writing.
09/21/08
Nice! I like your imagery of following the stream; and the One who never left. A good reminder to hold to what has true value.
09/21/08
Oh, very good. I enjoyed this. Great job.
What a wonderful message you have woven into a beatifully written story. One of my favorites this week. Excellent!
I admit that I'm not the brightest bulb in the box, but when I came to the **** I thought maybe you were chaning POVs and I got a tad confused. However, once I realized you didn't, it made sense.

I was really entranced by your description of the garden. Very detailed and vivid. I wanted to be there, too. Very nice story! Bravo.
Beautiful story. :)
09/24/08
Incredible message! I like that you put the Scripture at the end to put an exclamation point on the message of the piece. Beautifully written.
Very nice. I loved the vivid imagery of her garden. And her meeting with Jesus.