The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
This is deep. Worth the time to re-read in order for all of it to sink in. I like how the last line in each stanza rhymes. Good work!
Your poem truly portrays many aspects of the game of life. I love the message at the end.
09/18/08
I like this poem and agree it is worth a re-read to let it all sink in. Good work. May we all find peace in the prize.